Tag: Literacy

Confidence Journal

Date : Monday 6 May 2024
Things I am good at : New things I will have a go at : 
  • Finishing off work
  •  Maths
  •  Listening to people
  •  Looking after my siblings
  •  Cleaning my room
  •  Riding my bike
  •  Cleaning the kitchen
  • Eating
  • Drawing
  • Tracing animals
  • Typing
  • Study
  • Smiling more
  • Loving myself
  • Doing more Art
  • Making cards

This my Confidence Journal for this Term. We made a Animation about one thing at this Term. I will show my Blog my Animation in my next blog. My animation is Smiling more. 

The ancient package from space

Title The ancient package from space
Introduction

Set the scene – time, characters, location, situation, introduce the problem : the box.

 Once upon a time there was an ancient package at the door and then there was a knock on the door. 1 student decided to open the door and there was a note on the package that said This is an ancient package from space, there were 10 students including me in it and there were no teachers in the classroom.The 9 students’ names was Sarah,Bob,Chole,Jack,Sophia,Bailey,Olivia,Noah,Flora and me. The problem was the package was light and we had no clue what was inside of the box. There was at least 1 student who was brave enough to go get the box outside. 1 student tried to reach the box but she was scared of the box.
Paragraph 1

(Needs at least 3 sentences)

Write about what the characters think or suspect it might be.

 Bailey untied the rope because she won untied the rope first. Then we saw another note that said “ You opened this at 3:00pm”. 5 students thought It was a telescope. 4 students thought it was a magical bowl. I thought it was an anzac soldie’s toy because it’s almost anzac.
Paragraph 2

(Needs at least 3 sentences)

Write about the suspense of opening the box.

 I opened the box because it was 3:00 pm and there was an entire picnic. There were Maccas, cupcakes,Wendys,Ice cream from Burger King, Hot chips and paper plates and wooden spoons and forks and a telescope.
Paragraph 3

(Needs at least 3 sentences)

Write about what happens after the box has been opened!

 We were surprised that it was a nice picnic. That box was the nicest package ever in the world. The cream was scrumptious on the cupcake. We wish we were at the beach eating the picnic. I saw Noah sweating because he came back from football practice. Bailey said “This is the best year ever”. Noah said “Guys I made it into the team”. I had an idea that it would be the best day ever.
Paragraph 4

(Needs at least 3 sentences)

Write about how LS1 uses what was IN the box, for their learning in Term 2.

 We thought that we would learn about the Matariki because we have a telescope. Their head was confused and then I said the sun is a star not a planet and the sun can heat and burn anything. But there was a problem that we lost the glass of the telescope. I said “ Oh no”. The End

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